Our Appraisal Service

What This Service Offers

This service is for those who have written their manuscript - a novel, a memoir or a short story - and would like a full assessment of what is and isn't working. One of our team will read the entire manuscript and give you thorough and constructive written feedback. Once the appraisal document has been sent to you, you will have six weeks to take an optional one-hour long telephone consultation to discuss the report's recommendations. The the report will include feedback on:

  • Overview - How is it looking overall? Do you have a strong story idea and are you bringing it to life for the reader?
  • Plot and structure - Does it have a saggy middle or slow beginning? Are the key plot points in place and is your ending satisfying? 
  • Characters - Are your characters engaging or do they leave the reader not caring? Are their character arcs holding up?
  • Setting - Are you using setting to its full advantage so that it contributes to the story? Does your setting draw the reader in?
  • Dialogue - Are your voices authentic? Does your dialogue move the story along, or are you slipping into needless conversation, or worse? 
  • Point of view - Is your point of view choice working for your story arc, and are you maintaining it consistently throughout?
  • Language - Are you using a consistent tone and style throughout, and is your use of language effective and engaging?
  • Grammar & punctuation - Is your grammar being used correctly, and do you have any writing tics you need to be aware of?

Who This Service Is For

This process takes an-depth look at your work, which can result in anything from minor tweaks to a major rewriting, so do be prepared for that. For this reason, this service is for writers who:

  • Have written a decent second draft and now want to get the structure and content firmly in place before polishing the text and preparing for a final copyedit.
  • Have completed a full draft, polished or otherwise, but it doesn't seem to be working and they don't know how to fix it. This process can help identify why.

What This Service Costs

The cost of this service varies according to the length of the piece being assessed. Once you fill out the form below, giving us information about your manuscript, we will let you know the exact costs involved, but for now, here are some guidelines about our charges:

Novels & Memoirs

Full manuscript appraisal of up to 70,000 words is £700, plus £7 for every 1,000 extra words.

Short Stories

Short stories up to 2,000 words are £75, plus £10 for every 1,000 extra words.

Need a Manuscript Appraisal? 


Fill out this form and we will contact you via email with a quote and a turnaround estimate.

Congratulations on having your manuscript ready. We'll help you make it shine. You've worked hard to get this far, let us help you the rest of the way.  

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